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李颀 野老曝背 百岁老翁不种田，惟知曝背乐残年。有时扪虱独搔首，目送归鸿篱下眠

紫冰之翼

一直走。

一直走。

<p>朝云横度，辘辘车声如水去。白草黄沙，月照孤村三两家。&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 飞鸿过也，百结愁肠无昼夜。渐近燕山，回首乡关归路难。</p>
<p>作者是一位十七、八岁的小姑娘，江苏宜兴人，生卒年不详。北宋灭亡（1127年）时，作者的父亲蒋兴祖是阳武（今河南原阳县）县令，领兵反抗全家殉难，仅留天生丽质的女儿被金兵掳掠北上，过今河北雄县留下此词。&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; （侯爵良原注）</p>

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松树

白居易

白金换得青松树，君既先栽我不栽。 幸有西风易凭仗，夜深偷送好声来。

雷滨

<h2 style="MARGIN: 13pt 0cm; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 173%; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial">独坐敬亭山</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-WEIGHT: normal; FONT-SIZE: 11pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 173%"><o:p></o:p></span></h2>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 0cm; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-line-height-rule: exactly" align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt"><a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class14/Class17/200611/11351.html">李白</a><span lang="EN-US"> <o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-para-margin-top: 0cm; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-line-height-rule: exactly" align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt">　　众鸟高飞尽， 孤云独去闲。<span lang="EN-US"><br />
</span>　　相看两不厌， 只有敬亭山。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; mso-para-margin-top: 0cm; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-line-height-rule: exactly"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt">　　敬亭山在宣州（治所在今安徽宣城），宣州是六朝以来江南名郡，大<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>人如谢灵运、谢?等曾在这里做过太守。<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class14/Class17/200611/11351.html">李白</a>一生凡七游宣城，这首五绝作于天宝十二载（<span lang="EN-US">753</span>）<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class1/Class4/200411/3441.html">秋</a>游宣州时，距他被迫于天宝三载离开长安已有整整十年时间了。长期飘泊生活，使<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class14/Class17/200611/11351.html">李白</a>饱尝了人间辛酸滋味，看透了世态炎凉，从而加深了对现实的不满，增添了孤寂之感。此<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>写独坐敬亭山时的情趣，正是<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>人带着怀才不遇而产生的<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class14/Index.html">孤独</a>与寂寞的<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">感情</a>，到大自然怀抱中寻求安慰的生活写照。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; mso-para-margin-top: 0cm; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-line-height-rule: exactly"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt">　　前二句&ldquo;众鸟高飞尽，孤云独去闲&rdquo;，看似写眼前之景，其实，把<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class14/Index.html">孤独</a>之感写尽了：天上几只鸟儿高飞远去，直至无影无踪；寥廓的长空还有一片白云，却也不愿停留，慢慢地越飘越远，似乎世间万物都在厌弃<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>人。&ldquo;尽&rdquo;&ldquo;闲&rdquo;两个字，把读者引入一个&ldquo;静&rdquo;的境界：仿佛是在一群山鸟的喧闹声消除之后格外感到清静；在翻滚的厚云消失之后感到特别的清幽平静。因此，这两句是写&ldquo;动&rdquo;见&ldquo;静&rdquo;，以&ldquo;动&rdquo;衬&ldquo;静&rdquo;。这种&ldquo;静&rdquo;，正烘托出<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>人心灵的<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class14/Index.html">孤独</a>和寂寞。这种生动<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">形象</a>的写法，能给读者以联想，并且暗示了<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>人在敬亭山游览观望之久，勾画出他&ldquo;独坐&rdquo;出神的<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">形象</a>，为下联&ldquo;相看两不厌&rdquo;作了铺垫。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; mso-para-margin-top: 0cm; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-line-height-rule: exactly"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt">　　<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>的下半运用拟人<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">手法</a>写<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>人对敬亭山的喜爱。鸟飞云去之后，静悄悄地只剩下<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>人和敬亭山了。<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>人凝视着秀丽的敬亭山，而敬亭山似乎也在一动不动地看着<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>人。这使<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>人很动情&mdash;世界上大概只有它还愿和我作伴吧？&ldquo;相看两不厌&rdquo;表达了<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>人与敬亭山之间的深厚<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">感情</a>。&ldquo;相&rdquo;&ldquo;两&rdquo;二字同义重复，把<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>人与敬亭山紧紧地联在一起，<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">表现</a>出强烈的<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">感情</a>。结句中&ldquo;只有&rdquo;两字也是经过锤炼的，更突出<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>人对敬亭山的喜爱。&ldquo;人生得一知己足矣&rdquo;，鸟飞云去又何足挂齿！这两句<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>所创造的意境仍然是&ldquo;静&rdquo;的，表面看来，是写了<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>人与敬亭山相对而视，脉脉含情。实际上，<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>人愈是写山的&ldquo;有情&rdquo;，愈是<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">表现</a>出人的&ldquo;无情&rdquo;；而他那横遭冷遇，寂寞凄凉的处境，也就在这静谧的场面中透露出来了。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 6pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; mso-para-margin-top: 0cm; mso-para-margin-right: 0cm; mso-para-margin-bottom: .5gd; mso-para-margin-left: 0cm; mso-line-height-rule: exactly"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt">　　&ldquo;静&rdquo;是全<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>的血脉。这首平淡恬静的<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>之所以如此动人，就在于<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>人的思想<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">感情</a>与自然景物的高度融合而创造出来的&ldquo;寂静&rdquo;的境界，无怪乎沈德潜在《<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Class66/Index.html">唐</a><a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>别裁》中要夸这首<a class="channel_keylink" target="_blank" href="http://www.52yuwen.com/Article/Class67/Index.html">诗</a>是&ldquo;传&lsquo;独坐&rsquo;之神&rdquo;了。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>

一直走。

一直喜欢这两句诗中透出的那种恬淡的心境，这次才知道诗句之外诗人的心酸。境由心设。

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<p>浣溪沙徐门石潭谢雨道上作 &mdash;&mdash;苏轼</p>
<p>照日深红暖见鱼，连溪绿暗晚藏乌。黄童白叟聚睢盱。</p>
<p>麋鹿逢人虽未惯，猿猱闻鼓不须呼。归家说与采桑姑。</p>
<p>这年头哪里找这么美丽的地方呀？。。。。。不过听说包头的梅花鹿自由生活在市区，不知道真假。。。</p>
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一直走。

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